A Bottle
A Bottle - Alan Brownjohn
A Bottle
On the beach in sudden sunshine, her turn:
Write down, she said the first
word you think of, we’ll launch it
in the bottle. And what they sent out
was irretrievable. Meanwhile, a wave
had carried their footwear away, which they
had left while paddling. Out to sea,
round the Point, past the Basalt Caves,
the tide carried all four examples and
the bottle with them. That lasted much longer
than the footwear, which the sea soon
bedraggled. Pretty well screwed up, so to speak,
the bottle stayed in one piece and was watertight,
it was one of several environmental flaws
deplored by persons on the deck of a boat
circling round an offshore windfarm;
the fisherman guide, running trips to see the seals on
a famous sandbank would have seen it too,
and maintained his silence. It floated on
past a hinterland where first there appeared
a bright and perilous resort from which
a rail link went out passing many fields
of oilseed rape, and horses freed
of their blankets of summer until, with long
moss-greened commuter platforms, a city
kicked in with capital’s anonymous
glass megaliths. In one of those, an icon
guaranteed the manufacture of many
billions of similar bottles never to have
a mission like this one’s . . . For weeks and weeks
it didn’t make the shore, unlike the bodies
of two of the locally drowned and one
of the murdered . . . But at last a current
coaxed it into a lagoon where it finally
ended just inland on the purple verge
of a saltmarsh.
His writing had been large,
with a felt-tip pen, in black, on good notepad paper,
and although the sun had faded it, the word
was still clear, irretrievable, when an inquisitive hand
unscrewed the cap – not easy – and fingered it out.
To be standing there in a marsh in the onset
of even a small contradiction dis-
composed him: he had retrieved both
the bottle and the old assumption that led
him to think it must be a letter inside it.
The bottle, now an irrelevant messenger,
he dismissed at once, but what you might call
the “message” he kept. Against the odds, it raised
his confidence, if at moments he was disposed
to shiver and wonder whether he should just
let it go. But he did not do that, it was still
in his pocket on the day the two lovers
failed again to sense the treachery
of the tide and he, having read that one
extempore word, was at last tracked down
to “this beautiful lonely stretch of the Oyster Coast.”
from Ludbrooke and Others (Enitharmon, 2010), © Alan Brownjohn 2010, used by permission of the author