Poetry Archive Now Wordview 2022: The Race
by Richard Downes
The tanka form was learned at a facebook group called The Daily Haiku which provides daily prompts. I aim to respond to the prompts five days a week and I prefer to unify my responses during this working week. I consider that this poem has four themes my past working life, my relationship, climate chaos and the idea of a race towards something/someone special.
Poetry Archive Now Wordview 2022: The Race
I must hurry home
There is someone there to see
Must get my work done
I race against the boss clock
Worker working overtime
I must hurry home
Through the office the work gates
Into the valley
Where the acid river runs
Singeing the fields as it flows
I must hurry home
Before darkness settles down
Illuminated
Only by sickening moon
Besmirched by gaseous cloud
I must hurry home
To see her before sleep comes
Brings recurring dream
Metal sculptures breathing life
Screaming watch out broken glass
I must hurry home
Paddle this small sinking boat
Over stinking seas
Cushioned by billowing smoke
From plastic mountains burning
I must hurry home
Find her resting her head there
In fresh fields of green
Unspoiled as they were before
Extinctions nightmare started
A special thank you to our WordView 2021 poets.
Chair of the Judging Panel, Joelle Taylor, says: "We were thrilled by the range and scope of the poetry and techniques explored throughout the wide submissions. I have said before that to write a poem is an act of resistance but to then perform it as well is a revolution. It takes a bravery to face the page, and a further one to stand by your words. While we’ve all become more used to filming ourselves over the pandemic, all of us were deeply aware of that courage.
Often when on a judging panel we find ourselves faced with impossible decisions. If you can imagine, after sifting, it’s as though a hundred people have crossed the finish line at precisely the same moment but there are only three medals. How do we come to these decisions? Through the objective unpicking of the poems, through our individual passions, through a consideration of narratives, especially those lesser heard. We come to it through uneasy negotiation and through heart, and above all through our shared love and understanding of the possibilities of poetry.
Our honest applause goes to all who submitted, and I hope you can hear it.
Congratulations to those we selected. We hope to see you all again soon."
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