Poetry Archive Now Wordview 2021: Mr Else
by Josie Walsh
This poem came more rapidly into a first draft than is my usual writing experience . Its subject has been in my memory since the late seventies. Writing it, I was at pains to convey the whole question of having an environmental dream. And of the respect I felt, and feel still, for someone who holds on to deeply-felt hope, in very difficult circumstances.
Poetry Archive Now Wordview 2021: Mr Else
I remember the stale smell of the air
in that room, where we couldn’t see sky.
And the people who breathed there, had
relinquished outside, time passing slowly,
their skin, that particular pallor, so each face
matched the distempered walls.
If they came in quietly, anger was seeded
by random shouting or key bunches rattling.
They called me Miss and in turn they were Mr.
And I made it my rule not to learn any ‘labels’.
I remember a tall young man, his head
like an icon, whose surname was Else.
Once, he demanded I write to his wife, I refused;
explained if I did, it would be like a letter
from him to my husband. ‘Lady’, he said, calmly
before that flash when he took up his chair
and hurled it. ‘Lady, in here I feel nothing.
I might just as well write to your husband.’
Then he quietened and opened the file he always
carried. It bulged with his writing, his drawing
and cuttings. On the cover, its large-lettered title:
A Better World for My Children.
Poem recorded as part of Poetry Archive Now: Wordview 2021. Used by permission of author.
A special thank you to our WordView 2021 poets.
Chair of the Judging Panel, Imtiaz Dharker, says: "An idea that began as a response to the world shutting down has, joyfully, become a way to invite the whole world in. It has been exciting to see the entries come in from different countries, from marginalised voices, from people of all backgrounds who now know this space belongs to them. My fellow judges and I were struck by the immediacy of experience and commitment to language in the winning entries. It's also good to think that the rest of the entries will continue to be seen as an invaluable record of our times."
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